ladygrey
I wouldn’t have sent Kitty to Elsewhere (except she was being a dumbass and deserved some sort of punishment). I would have gotten into the wedding plans and the fake marriage. Working that around all the politics and danger and subterfuge I think would have been more interesting.
Even though I didn’t especially love this book, I'll probably read the last one, out of curiosity, and I'll just have to hope there's more Knox.