chillywilly
Written on Dec 16, 2020
My favorite part is when Harper give Grey the nickname Scary Grey because of his stance as a guardsman and his duty to protect the prince, Rhen. There were 2 things I wish had been done differently. 1) At the beginning, the author's action scene when Harper is being taken and shortly there after, is disjointed with very short sentences. I found it to be annoying, but also the only time I really saw this happening in the book this way. 2) In some areas, I felt the author was very descriptive while other areas she wasn't. Like with Grey, I don't really recall much of his description except that he has dark messy hair, but Lilith is very detailed.