Marissa Lupe Author
Written on Mar 29, 2023
But the stylistic choice to not include quotation and having very few dialogue tags, plus the time jumps just as I was getting used to things... all pulled me out of the story too much. I could have connected with the characters better if their emotions were more clear. A lot is left to interpretation in this area, which I do like using my imagination, however occasionally it's nice to be able to enjoy a story without overthinking it.
But overall, very worth reading.