
Metaphorosis Reviews
Summary
Foss Butcher is likely to never amount to more than a butcher's life and perhaps some widower's second wife - until a sorcerer steals a piece of her heart, dooming her to follow him to his magical home, where she finds herself unwittingly involved in the fate of the entire kingdom.
Review
I read this book immediately after The Lost Bookshop, and for some reason linked them, though they really have very little in common. As I noted there, Bookshop has better prose, and this book has a better story. Rather to my surprise, I ultimately found myself rating this book higher.
A Harvest of Hearts has some trouble getting off the ground. The prose is clunky (though you get used to it) and there are a fair number of awkward (or just wrong) formations and word choices. I found it a notable obstacle, initially.
Gradually, however, I was won over by the plot, which is innovative, if built on familiar elements. The characters that move it along are fairly standard types, and there’s no great surprise in their choices or resolutions, but they’re well deployed and engaging. There’s a little inconsistency (or maybe tension) – e.g., the protagonist sees herself as ugly for reasons beyond her control (and unsurprisingly, learns to think she isn’t), but sees no problem with describing a villain as ugly (with the hint that that means lacking in moral fiber). Foss’ choices aren’t always consistent, and at times feel forced for the sake of plot movement, but overall the lapses can be skipped over.
There’s a talking cat, which ordinarily I’m not keen on, as being a very overused device. But here, it’s charming and adds to the story without being coy or overly cute.
The prose isn’t great, frankly, but the story as a whole is engaging and fun.
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.