layawaydragon
I wasn't hooked or engaged, it was just killing time without anything better to do and when I had other stuff to do, I didn't pick it back up. I had to make myself go back but I can't do it anymore.
I found it bland and the writing uninspired, like a science report. Which is such a pity because I really liked Aeryn and Theo. Theo was the more engaging perspective throughout. Aeryn is a bit stiff, but won me over.
I think the foundations are there, but it's lacking spark. I hate to be so vague and unhelpful, but it's just a gut feeling. *shrug*