EBookObsessed
Written on Nov 23, 2013
I understand that this is from my erotic pile, but please SOME STORY IS NEEDED!
Of what I read, Rebecca was filling in for her brother who was hurt in a bus accident (prior story) as the main sound technician. She is trying to hold his spot in the tour until he recovers and can return. She is recently graduated and a woman in a male dominate profession and she was barely accepted by the band, therefore you would think she wants to be seen as professional and competent, at least performing one show, before she starts taking on all of the single band members, at once, like a groupie.
She wants to sleep with Trey and although Trey has no problem with helping her out, he can tell that his friend Eric is really interested in Reb and Eric want to keep her to himself. Reb starts to fall for Eric because he is sweet and funny. Ummm, didn't see it. Just because he showed a little more concern for Reb then just an opportunity for sex, that didn't make him sweet. All he wants to do is have sex with her and his attempts at humor are sad, not funny.
Erotica has to be the hardest stories to write because one person's sexy is another person's ewww, but there has to be more of a story between the sex scenes or else it's just like watching 10 hours of non-stop hardcore porn. It is no longer sexy. It becomes a non-stop pounding. A well-written sweet, romantic kiss can be more exciting than some of these explicit scenes of sex.
Hopefully this was just a very bad example of Olivia Cunning's talent.
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