Leah
The premise of the story was awesome - Jen meets a guy, Alex, who leaves her a note in a bar for her to open exactly a year later revealing her future, and I liked that it was the catalyst for Jen to change her life. Except, she changes her life and we're only told about it afterward - for example, Jen starts a blog and we don't see its beginnings, we just see when it's popular (the typical fictional blogger who's famous after one post). There was too much showing, and not enough telling. The months whizz past - in fact, I'm almost sure the timeline wasn't right; because we somehow skipped Christmas without nary a mention??? It was all just a bit rushed, with too many months skipped; and only being told afterward what Jen was up to. I wanted to see her become a success, see her branch out on her own, and not just be told it.
I absolutely loved Alex, which made Jen's prejudices of him hard to swallow, because it was all based on word of mouth and perhaps a bit of her own fear, but Jen never actually gave Alex the opportunity to defend himself against all her accusations. It was so frustrating to see her blow hot and cold, and it surprised me that Alex was so willing to just put up with it.
Don't get me wrong, this was not a bad book. I did like Jen, a lot, I just wished she was less indecisive, and stopped worrying about some unknown woman with pearl earrings. She seemed like such a strong character that it was hard to see why she was so nervous of Alex, of putting her heart on the line. I understand she had planned to marry her boyfriend of 9 years, but that's all we know of it, so it's not as if we know if it destroyed her trust in men or anything, because we're never told. When Jen and Alex are together, it's quite magical, and it was clear to me that they had something special. I also loved Jen's relationship with her Gramps, although her negativity towards Marcie was baffling. Yes, her nan was gone, but surely she would want her Gramps to be happy?
This was a topsy-turvy read for me. I wanted to love it, but there was a lot about the novel that I just couldn't get on board with. Jill's one of the finest Chick Lit writers around, I will always read her novels, this one just disappointed me a little bit, especially with the ending. Where was my big romantic scene?? There was like this big reveal and then nothing really happened. Where was the rain and the romantic scene, etc? :(