Doctor’s Fake Fiancée

by Charlize Starr

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So, first let me address an issue with KU. Authors publish these books on KU, knowing that page views get more money. The story advertised is 6% of the total book. Now, the rest is filled with other stories and thats fine, but why?!? Why are those stories included? Why not publish them independently? So, I read just Doctor's Fake Fiancee and then returned the book. So many authors are frustrated with KU for the manipulation that occurs and filling 94% of a book with other stories that aren't mentioned anywhere seems shady to me.

Now, the story. Predictable and trite. Both characters were static and the writing was choppy. Much more of a 'tell' not 'show' writing style. I felt that the whole book was just telling me what they did instead of writing a story that the reader experiences. I think the story could have had potential and my hope would be that this was something to fill the void between Alexa Riley book releases. But, between the 94% of the book that was other stories and the writing, I don't know that I would read any other books from this author.