thebookdisciple
Written on Aug 3, 2017
Now, the story. Predictable and trite. Both characters were static and the writing was choppy. Much more of a 'tell' not 'show' writing style. I felt that the whole book was just telling me what they did instead of writing a story that the reader experiences. I think the story could have had potential and my hope would be that this was something to fill the void between Alexa Riley book releases. But, between the 94% of the book that was other stories and the writing, I don't know that I would read any other books from this author.