Reviewed by clairelm on
I found the characters two dimensional and irritating, particularly Bill with his crass, crude comments and attitude. Lily was a bit pathetic and watery.
There were also lots of spelling and grammar mistaes which affected the way the story read and made it difficult to read.
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- Started reading
- 27 July, 2014: Finished reading
- 27 July, 2014: Reviewed