kymmiejournals
Written on Dec 13, 2018
Although the characters are brilliant and didn’t give Carlos a headache, it lacks that strong pull on the plot compared to the first book. The story focuses more on how Carlos is a rebellious teenager. It wasn’t really clear how he got out of his old gang or how he got in the first time. Meanwhile, Kiara is suffering from stuttering, although I don’t know what caused it, it was not explained why she has it or no psychological or deeper meaning as to why Kiara stutters. With or without it, it doesn’t have any impact on the story. It would be better if there’s a history to it – how she got it, was it from trauma, a bad childhood or dark past so that Carlos can help Kiara overcome it.
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