moraa
Written on Jun 9, 2020
-Where are all the POC? (there were one or two but the fact that I can’t remember their names is telling)
-The police/crime aspect should have taken a bit of a back seat – the story would have been more interesting for it
-Some of the relationships seem to be there only to serve the plot or for pure shock factor
-Your career isn’t a personality trait (saying this to all the secondary characters)