empressbrooke
Written on Jun 7, 2016
There were a few things that kept it from earning another star from me. First, the end gets bogged down in endless paragraphs of internal dialogue from the main character in which she waxes poetic about what she's learned over the course of the book. It isn't consistent with the rest of the book and feels like the author was just pouring everything out to get to the end. Second, the "surprise" villain that pops up near the end is cartoonish in how single-mindedly evil they are. This person is supposed to be a counterpart to the family who rules the Light city, but she's drawn with far less nuance. And finally, the main character has this supposedly "best" friend who only pops up or is thought about when the plot calls for it.
Ultimately, it was a really fun read, with a few flaws that kept it from being great.