wyvernfriend
Written on Apr 1, 2012
I do have some problems with father figures or almost father figures becoming romantic figures, it's an almost deal-breaker, particularly when he uses a post-hypnotic suggestion, implanted when she was very young to send her to sleep when she's an adult "for her own good".
Not my favourite of hers, not a bad story overall, but more joined short stories than an actual full novel