Leah
Written on Mar 23, 2011
Heather Gudenkauf burst onto the scene last year with her debut novel The Weight of Silence and it was picked for the TV Book Club. I have the book on my shelf but I haven’t yet managed to pick it up. I then noticed her second novel was up on Amazon, called These Things Hidden and I thought it sounded very intriguing. I managed to snag myself a proof copy and I read it the day after it arrived, as it’s been a while since I’ve read something in the Jodi Picoult mould. I found it to be a very quick read, the short chapters lending to it a carry-on-reading feel and overall I was fairly impressed with the novel.
I’m going to keep my review short and simple as the novel is best read when you don’t know too much about the plot. The book focuses on four women: Allison, who has just gotten out of jail; Brynn, Allison’s sister; Charm, who is looking after her ill step-father; and Claire, adopted mother to son Joshua. They each have connections to each other and what happened the night Allison drowned her little girl has ramifications for them all. We follow each character, during short, sharp chapters as the story unfolds as to what really happened the night Allison’s daughter was drowned and exactly how Charm and Claire were involved. I thought the plot was very well drawn-out and I liked seeing how Allison had to adjust to life on the outside after 5 years in jail. At times the plot was rushed, but on the whole I liked the pacing of it.
Despite everything Allison has done, I did find myself feeling sympathetic towards her. Yes, it’s wrong to kill a child, but I could understand the method behind the madness. I don’t agree with it, but I can see why she was driven to do that. I didn’t particularly like Brynn, Allison’s sister, I just never clicked with her really, though it was painfully clear that night had changed her irrevocably. Charm was my favourite character, the way she cares for her sick step-father and everything she does just made me like her all the more. There was something about her that just clicked with me and I looked forward to the chapters that featured her. Claire was also a character I enjoyed. You can feel how much she wants a child so when she adopts Joshua, you can see how her world is now complete.
These Things Hidden is well-written, told in third- and first-person narrative, with short chapters that make it easy to ‘just read one more’. There isn’t much wrong with the book, not really, but for such a difficult subject matter, it does seem like a too-light read. I didn’t see the depth to it, I suppose, and it might have been better to flesh out some scenes a bit more. It definitely needed a bit more gravitas because although the subject matter has kept me thinking since I’ve finished it, it’s not because of the book, it’s just what the book inspired, it’s not a topic you see covered every day and so I find myself debating it. The book just seemed too light and some of the things were a bit implausible. I do however applaud Gudenkauf for tackling the subject, despite the ‘light’ feel to it, I think she has done it well. I knew on some subconscious level how it would end, but I think overall I liked the novel. Implausible, yes, but highly readable all the same and I will definitely go back to read The Weight of Silence and look out for further novels from Ms. Gudenkauf.