
celinenyx
Written on Nov 21, 2020
This book's biggest sin is that it's immensely boring. It starts off with a bang - Nancy finds a man freezing to death and after nursing him back to health, finds out she saved him from a murder attempt. This section is exciting, and the characters have good chemistry. The story capitalizes on this by...
Nancy and Gabriel dining together every night and having nice chats with some sexual tension.
I mean... I love good chats and food as much as anyone, but there was no conflict. The two characters both have secrets, but the reader doesn't know what they are, and it makes the characters inaccessible and flat.
The characters finally disclose Important Information to each other at 40%, but to be honest, I couldn't make myself care. DNF.
Nancy and Gabriel dining together every night and having nice chats with some sexual tension.
I mean... I love good chats and food as much as anyone, but there was no conflict. The two characters both have secrets, but the reader doesn't know what they are, and it makes the characters inaccessible and flat.
The characters finally disclose Important Information to each other at 40%, but to be honest, I couldn't make myself care. DNF.