Monstrous Beauty by Elizabeth Fama

Monstrous Beauty

by Elizabeth Fama

In alternating chapters, tells of the mermaid Syrenka's love for Ezra in 1872 that leads to a series of horrific murders, and present-day Hester's encounter with Ezra's ghost that reveals her connection to the murders and to Syrenka.

Reviewed by Amber (The Literary Phoenix) on

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This book had me hooked from the beginning.

When I went into Monstrous Beauty, my opinions on it were 100% "Ugh. A mermaid book?  I probably won't like this one, either.  Well - here goes!"  ...  I WAS SO SO WRONG.  This book is beautifully written, the characters are deep and interesting, and the story is just magical enough to be fantasy, but mostly it reads like a contemporary ghost story.  I loved it.  Monstrous Beauty exceeded my expectations in every way and I was so, so pleased.

Hester is my literary dopplegänger.

There are plenty of characters out there that I will read, and relate to in some way.  Characters who are interesting, likable, or have similar quirks or interests.  Loves, I have never related to a character as much as I related to Hester.  Within the first chapter of listening, I knew that she:

- Had a little brother she mostly gets along with.
- Is inexplicably drawn to the ocean.
- Is a HUGE history buff.
- Is the QUEEN of socially awkward.
- Hates parties because they're dumb.
- Doesn't seem to really have any close female friends.

These probably aren't that remarkable, but all together?  Hester and I would be friends, at the very least, because I am all these things, too.



She's not the only likable character, though!  Everyone in this story is really interesting.  I liked Pastor McKean a lot as well, with his kindly demeanor.  I liked Hester's brother, Sam.  And even Syrenka and Ezra and Adeline were great to read.  Peter and Eleanor.  All of them.  I can't say I liked Eleanor as a PERSON, but as a CHARACTER?  She's really good, really well-written.

The history fanatic in me was dying.

Dying in a good way!  I am not an expert on Plymouth, Massachusetts.  In fact, despite my proximity, I've never been there.  But you can tell when the author has gone the extra mile to research her world.  Whenever there's the slightest bit of historical fiction in a book, I am ready to destroy it.  I am ready to find the lazy inaccuracies.  Monstrous Beauty is really careful, really intricate, and it adds so much to the story.

I really enjoyed the scenes where Hester was at her job at Plymouth Plantation.  I loved her switching between her thoughts and character, making pottage and sweeping her cottage.  Also... I just plain loved the fact she had a job?  And actually went to work.  And had to make excuses when she wasn't there, like REAL LIFE.

A quick shout out to the narrator, here?  Katherine Kellgren uses a lot of different dialects in her reading, but I think that the dialect she uses for Hester at Plymouth Plantation is amazing?  I can imagine Hester in the break room practicing her accent so that she's more historically accurate.  Not just because the job requires it, but because it's important to her.



THINGS THAT BOTHERED ME, AS A HISTORIAN?

This is nothing to do with the research or the history, but I need to chastise Hester.  AS A HISTORIAN SHE SHOULD KNOW BETTER.  There's a point where she takes a fragile, historical book and just... shoves it in her backpack?  It's a little journal and it's over three-hundred years old.  OMG WHAT ARE YOU THINKING.  And even if she's being dumb and impulsive and I want to forgive her, SHE DOES IT AGAIN LATER.  With another three-hundred-year-old antique.

STOP STOP STOP.

The mermaid-ness of this story is important, but not overwhelming.
I bring this up because if you're considering this book for all its undersea treasure and aquatic goodness, that's few and far between.  The fact that there are merpeople is really important to this story, but at it's core?  Monstrous Beauty is a ghost story.

IT'S A REALLY GOOD GHOST STORY.

There's a lot of twists and interestingness with the ghosts, so I won't go into detail (I REALLY WANT TO).  I will say there was one bit near the end where I legit thought the author had just dismissed a character and was making up justifications for this in my head (I came up with reasonable ones I found acceptable!) AND THEN NO SHE DIDN'T AND STUFF HAPPENED.  It was really good.  I was really pleased.

I do like a good ghost story.

Overall?

I loved Monstrous Beauty, and I'm glad it's a standalone because it's a well-written concise story all together.  I would definitely read another YA fantasy book by this author, especially if she continues to use this level of research and give us complicated characters.

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