Ice (Poseidon's Girls, #1)

by M.S. Watson

[Chelsea]

I wanted to love this book so much but I just couldn't get into it as much as I wanted to. I liked the plot, it was quick most of the time. The beginning lacked something to keep me entertained. I think it lacked a little something.

I enjoyed thesis character. She was fun and pretty smart. I hated her twin sister though. I wish their relationship was better and she acted her age. They never seemed like sisters, they were too distant from each other. The author only wrote about her sometimes so I felt like she was excluded from the story a little bit when she could have been a great addition.

The plot was decent. I liked some of the little twists the author added in but a lot of it was predictable. I thought the use of the Greek Gods could have been done way better and more elegantly. They're Gods after all.

The writing was a little inconsistent and choppy for this to be a really good book. Some dialogue was missing and some pieces were too detailed. At the end of reading it I wasn't sure if I wanted more or not and that makes it a little disappointing. Another story with so much potential, wasted.