Chelsea
Written on Aug 6, 2014
I enjoyed thesis character. She was fun and pretty smart. I hated her twin sister though. I wish their relationship was better and she acted her age. They never seemed like sisters, they were too distant from each other. The author only wrote about her sometimes so I felt like she was excluded from the story a little bit when she could have been a great addition.
The plot was decent. I liked some of the little twists the author added in but a lot of it was predictable. I thought the use of the Greek Gods could have been done way better and more elegantly. They're Gods after all.
The writing was a little inconsistent and choppy for this to be a really good book. Some dialogue was missing and some pieces were too detailed. At the end of reading it I wasn't sure if I wanted more or not and that makes it a little disappointing. Another story with so much potential, wasted.