Onyx Unleashed

by Tanya Vought

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This book was a struggle. Here are the pros and cons:
The concept it really interesting. She is being held prisoner because the bad guys are looking for her father. The bad guys are demons which is a different paranormal twist. You don't know whats going on at first so you are intrigued and want to keep reading to figure out what the heck is happening!
The cons, however, outweighed the pros for me. The writing felt awkward at times and sometimes I was rolling my eyes at how cheesy it was. I would roll my eyes, but then the next line would be intriguing so I would keep reading. This went on for a few chapters and finally I just couldn't take any more. This was a DNF for me. I think it had potential but the writing just didn't work for me.