Treasure

by Rebekah Weatherspoon

[celinenyx]

Really sweet f/f story, but I felt like it was more about lust than emotions. The writing was more show than tell, which made it difficult for me to stay invested. It skirts mental health issues like anxiety and suicide and one of the characters has ADHD, but I felt like these themes weren't explored enough.

The scene where they're touching each other's crotches in a room full of children (underneath a sweatshirt, but still) made me really uncomfortable. I understand lust and wanting to get each other naked, but it seemed pretty inappropriate for a 18 & 20 year old.

Content warnings: homophobia, suicide, alcoholism.