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I gave this 2 stars instead of 3 because the entire book lacked focus. Actually, I would have given it 1 star if I didn't enjoy the other books in this series. *sigh* where to begin?
Derek pops the question in a very cute scene at the beginning, which started the book off with a warm feeling. It didn't last, though. I thought it funny how Avery was lamenting how she just couldn't wear an off the rack wedding dress and OMG Totes didn't have time to make a wedding dress, so she was going to wear a 60 year old re-purposed prom dress to marry her beloved. Oh, but she had all the time in the world to follow and spy upon other people and tell everyone she know about the goings on of the law breakers living at the apartment house. This, despite the fact that a)that's why no one liked the busy body and b)that's what got the nosy old bat killed. The whole scene where Avery asks Kate to be her matron of honor was excruciating. Instead of telling Kate, "you're my best friend, you found my beloved for me, please share in my special day." instead she explains how she has no other friends and her mom lives in California. Hey, way to go! Make Kate feel like an last resort!
It also felt like the prologue and the epilogue were added on later, almost like the editor said, "hey, this book is terrible, add on a few heart tugging scenes and it'll make it more palatable."
As a footnote, I'd like to add that my experience with law enforcement is very slight (and not in a criminal sense), but I can tell you that in real life, asking the chief of police to "let me know if you find out anything" on a murder investigation, would never happen. Not only because such details would be used to track down the killer but also because it would jeopardize the prosecution if and when the case went to trial. It's a convenient plot device, but it's implausible and ridiculous and drives me up the wall.
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