Amnesia

by Kylie Hillman

[Eve1972]

This is actually a pretty cool cover in my opinion. It's a good representation of the story within. Good composition. The typography is eye-catching and interesting. I like the use of the tiny graphics with the tagline as well.


Unfortunately, this one ended up just being OK for me. It started out promising but somewhere along the way it got WAY too convoluted and confusing. On top of that, the whole plot (as well as the characters) felt extremely underdeveloped. I didn't feel like we got enough background on the relationship between Jax and Amber making it hard to understand why he was so obsessed with her.



Not to mention Amber's actions were confusing, to say the least. One minute she is fighting Jax and repulsed by him the next she is getting turned on and feeling love for him. It gave me whiplash. The whole drug story felt underdeveloped as well. Amber's relationship with Xander felt underdeveloped. And don't even get me started on the ending...sigh.

Like I said it was just OK. The bones for a fantastic story were all there everything just needed to be fleshed out a whole lot more.