Reviewed by Katie King on
Speaking of that, wow does this drag on. Not just in length, not just in useless characters, but in scenes that are literally over and done with in the span of a few pages. If something can be wrapped up that quickly, there's a good chance that it's not important enough to show. Or at least, don't keep all your scenes like that in. It seems like there was tons of filler added and nobody cut any of it out.
Don't forget to mention how beautiful Winter is!
Reading updates
- Started reading
- 28 December, 2015: Finished reading
- 28 December, 2015: Reviewed