Reviewed by Ashley on
I docked a star for two reasons:
1) There were quite a few editing errors. Silly typos like "Lik,e" instead of "Like,". That was kind of disappointing to be honest. I'm usually pretty understanding with errors and oftentimes I don't even notice them, but these really stood out to me.
2) I was getting a lot of déjà vu while reading. I think it was because of the similar environment from Forever With You (the martial arts center). I had weird moments where I actually thought I was reading a book I'd already read. Maybe it was just because of how much time had past.. I remembered a few details from Forever With You (like the fact that there was a martial arts center) but didn't remember many of the actual details from the book so it just felt really similar to Fire in You.
Anyway, still a good read!
Reading updates
- 24 January, 2017: Started reading
- 26 January, 2017: Finished reading
- 26 January, 2017: Reviewed