Choke Me

by Ker Dukey and K Webster

[Eve1972]

Ya, this one wasn't great for me. I love these two authors, but I don't think this series is for me. Which sucks because the next book is a "daddy" book, but I don't trust that there won't be OW drama and/or OW sex scenes in it. I am trying very hard to avoid those type of things in my books lately. It is just not my jam at the moment.



SO..onto the reasons this one didn't work for me. Right off the bat we have two fairly (nasty) descriptive sex scenes with two different OW that Natasha witnesses. Which made Ren just disgusting to me right off the bat. Then Natasha goes from hating him and thinking he murdered her friend to f-cking him in like five minutes (sans condom...gag). On top of that, this book was basically just sex scene after sex scene with very little plot. When "I" start to skim the sex scenes you know there are too many. (lol) I would have liked less sex and more story. Also, I wasn't a fan with how the whole BFF's murder played out. It made Ren even more of a douchebag and let William get away with manslaughter.



Honestly, I am probably overthinking this and being nitpicky since they mean it to just be a smokin' hot and short novella, but a bunch of things didn't mesh for me. It happens. Tons of people will love it, and that is great. As I said above, I usually love both these authors...oh well. Can't love them all, right??