His Kiss

by Melanie Marks

Sure it's swoonworthy but it's also painful to read. First off, Ally is a complete hypocrite. She has already kissed him behind her boyfriend's back so do you really have the moral high ground? And secondly, they both (Aiden and her) cry about it. It was kind of pathetic.

And bloody hell, she is ridiculously judgemental. Half the drama is in her head. He (Griffin) doesn't like her. He's not good for her. He literally keeps asking her out and she shoots him down. It was exhausting. He even asks her to a school dance and he gets his mum to call her when his appendix burst and he's in the hospital and she doesn't even want to go see him, crapping on about how she should stay away and he's no good. Sure she does eventually go and see him but she's a freaking idiot. Griffin deserves better. Someone bloody sane. The ending was way too abrupt, it could've used another chapter to smooth out the edges. 2 stars, without half the drama it could have been 3, but I was just too exhausted. Look it's not all bad, I'm just getting too old to care about teenage angst. It makes me remember all the things I hated about high school. There were some funny lines and there was heaps of fluff. My favourite part was the gummy bears. She chucks a bunch of gummy bears on his car under his windscreen wipers when its cold and dreary and raining and when he puts them on it makes a rainbow. I have no idea if this would work even remotely well but it sounded amusing.