Reviewed by layawaydragon on
* Admittedly not a fan of reading the script type set up, but it worked and showed Steve's POV and character well.
The script set up through me enough that even with a small cast of characters, I had trouble keeping them straight. I can't handle the names just floating out there type set up, I kept reading over them and forgetting. Same thing with the acronyms, even though I figured both those things out from context, it was disorienting at first. Except MS, that has a different meaning to me (the disease fwiw) and I couldn't for the life of me remember. Then I facepalmed so hard after I looked it up.
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- Started reading
- 3 March, 2016: Finished reading
- 3 March, 2016: Reviewed