Reviewed by clementine on
I thought Ash was a solid first novel with quite nice prose and a compelling story. The chunks of it that were inspired by Cinderella were identifiable, but it was its own story which held up without the classic fairy tale behind it. There were additions that fleshed out the story, and the casting of the fairy godmother as a male fairy cursed to love Ash was really neat.
I do think that there were some issues with awkward pacing and phrasing which affected my enjoyment of the book and didn't allow me to become fully immersed in it. It was like it was almost incredibly atmospheric, but didn't quite manage. It moved too fast, and a lot of things weren't given enough time to fully develop, and, yes, the prose was not perfect. There were bits of it that made me pause to frown. Ash's relationships with Sidhean and Kaisa moved too fast for me - especially Sidhean, who didn't appear quite enough for me to really get a good grip on his character. Also, the tension needed to be ratcheted up a bit. Obviously it's going to have a happy ending, but I just felt like there could have been more obstacles in the way, to keep me guessing.
Overall, though, I did like it. I thought the concept was really good, the prose was in general quite nice, and it was interesting the whole way through. I will definitely be picking up Huntress.
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- Started reading
- 27 December, 2012: Finished reading
- 27 December, 2012: Reviewed