Other than that, I was happy with the story over all. The addition to the world building was great, love the history and "mythology" and,
The wolf had never, not once, wanted to eat the queen's children, even on the day when Llor tried to ride him like a pony and Erian (unintentionally) shot the tip of his tail with an arrow. He did, however, want to eat their picnic lunch.
How can you not love Bayn, the super wolf? It's impossible.
The super brief look at the other queendoms makes me want to read more about them, I hope some books are written about those. I have read The Deepest Blue and love it, Belene is great, which makes me all the more eager for the other queendoms. Here's hoping.