Jane
Written on Nov 16, 2017
2. This was...interesting. There was little development, though. The story exists for the sole purpose of sex between two long lost lovers.
3. Conversation feels Hallmark-y's brand of fake.
4. At the end, the writing felt weak. I had to reread some pages to get them to make sense, but some others didn't make sense. Like, there were no transitions between different positions -- it just jumped like a movie montage, like the reader was supposed to catch up.