Cocktails and Books
Written on Jan 18, 2014
Becoming His Slave is the first book in the Dominion of Brothers series by Talon P.S. A couple of things struck me as I finished this book. First was the length of it, this book was around 550 pages and none of them filler pages either. There is action, drama and/or sex on every page. The other was that there was the short blurb about the story only tells about half of the story. This book takes you on a wonderful journey that is filled with hot sex and complex relationships and how it’s all combined.
Katianna is an up and coming writer when she meets Trenton. She has many issues regarding trust, and communication. There were many times that she was borderline winy but I wonder if it’s a combination of how she overthinks things and being a writer and letting your imagination take hold. Katianna is not the bravest sole is the world either.
Trenton is a hot and sexy Dom, but he is not just any Dom he is a Dominus (Master of all Doms). He trains both subs and slaves and he is also the owner of a security firm for several high profile clients. Nothing get past Trenton. He loves his life but wants a life slave and he thinks Katianna is just the person for it.
My biggest issue with Trenton was he was unwilling to compromise with Katianna. When he wants something and he seems bound and determined to get it his way. My other issue was his lack of communication with Katianna. While he tells her he wants her to be his life slave he forgets to explain what that is to her and tell her his feelings for her. (I mean who wants to spend their life with someone who won’t tell them they love them!) That might have moved everything along faster.
I was not fond of how the story ended. The book just stopped. Now I am left wanting to know how Paris and Diesel turn out as well as several of the other characters like Amelia and Cliff. I will be picking up the next couple of books in the series shortly. I enjoyed this book a lot. I had a hard time putting this book down. The author does a great job of drawing you into this story. I found it well written and very detailed. The main and massive amount of secondary characters were interesting and realistic. Overall, this was a magnificent book.
Read by Victoria for Cocktails and Books