Eve1972
Written on Apr 11, 2016
WOW...this book was SO bad...so so very bad..
"She bit her lip and blushed. A hot surge of lust shot through me. I was in a bad way. If I stood up right now, I'd knock over the ketchup bottle with my dick. Yeah, it was that long."
I don't know about y'all, but I have a hard time believing a giant dick encased in jeans is going to knock a ketchup bottle that sitting on the middle of the table. Perhaps a call to Ripley's is in order...
Then we had this diddy... "I was stunned. She'd lied to me about the pill. My perfect angel had been keeping secrets. And now she was in trouble because of it."
Umm, this statement would have been fine had they not had the discussion way earlier in the book about how she wasn't on the pill, and how excited that made him because he wanted to get her pregnant...
Perhaps the author suffers from short term memory loss...
Oh and I am not all that well informed about U.S military, but it seemed a bit far fetched that this dude enlisted, became a Marine, and got out, all by the ripe old age of 21??