stacey_is_sassy
Written on Apr 22, 2015
Unfortunately this story was not for me. I'm going to sound like an old lady, but the language was vulgar and the sex was OTT. This author has two favourite words and they both start with c. Honestly, it wasn't the language or the sex scenes that turned me off, some of the sex scenes were HOT. My biggest problem was the hero was a self-absorbed, pretentious douche who made the virginal heroine feel insignificant. He implies that she probably couldn't satisfy him and he'd have to go elsewhere.
Overall, not my favourite type of erotic romance. I don't mind a hero who is forceful and dominant, but to show no respect for his submissive is not appealing. There were also a few spelling and grammar mistakes that stood out.