whisperingchapters
Written on Jul 9, 2014
Collide started out very slow for me. It got really good after a few chapters in, but it lacked a lot. I really wanted to like this book because the cover really had me intrigued. I'm sad to say I was disappointed. I loved the story but some characters didn't really developed throughout the story. There were parts that I was reading that I considered lacked information.
I would have wanted more of Mari's character and also the friendship that Mari, Maya and Dakota had. I would have loved to know more about those three characters. Their friendship was mentioned in passing but never given too much thought and I was saddened by this fact. Also, I wanted more in the story of Josh leaving and the relationship Dakota and David had. There was a friend, Elaine, mentioned at the beginning of the story that I thought I would see more in the story, but I didn't. Maybe she will be again in the second book. Who knows?
In summary, I give this book a 3.5 out of 5 stars just because this story lacked a lot and I'm sad by this because the story itself is good, just not great. It would have been so good if it had included a whole lot more. The author confirmed that for the second book there will be more background to the characters and more information to the whole story, which is exactly what I am looking for.