Bookbee
Written on Feb 2, 2014
I liked it; I did. But I didn't love it. (I really wish there were half-stars; I thought it was better than a 3 but definitely not as good as a 4.)
Interestingly, I felt Three & Four's relationship more than I did Seven and Chase's. I want to know what happened to them... and to Twenty-three.
There is definitely a need for an impartial editor. There were just too many instances of not knowing who was doing/saying what to whom without some mental gymnastics on my part trying to parse the previous paragraph(s).