MurderByDeath
Written on Nov 14, 2012
The murderer was a surprise - the author did a very good job with interwoven plot lines, red herrings, lots of suspects and misdirection.
The writing still doesn't flow as naturally as it could, but this could be in part that it is written in the third person, so often feels more like a narration than a story to get lost in. Still, I'll look for the third and hope for continuous improvement.