Kat @ Novels & Waffles
It almost feels like there are two separate stories being told here; one focusing largely on Stevie's strange relationship with her fellow classmate, David, and the other on the unsolved mysteries of Ellingham Academy. I couldn't care less about the former; give me more chilling murders, please and thank you! I honestly find David's character, and Stevie's connection to him, baffling. This part of the story seems so disjointed with the rest of the plot. Removing it would've created a more streamlined narrative, in my opinion.
Additionally, the first two acts spend a significant amount of time laying the groundwork for the finale's big reveal, and while the payoff was thrilling and unputdownable, I wish I didn't have to slog through so much filler to get there.