celinenyx
Written on Nov 21, 2020
Nancy and Gabriel dining together every night and having nice chats with some sexual tension.
I mean... I love good chats and food as much as anyone, but there was no conflict. The two characters both have secrets, but the reader doesn't know what they are, and it makes the characters inaccessible and flat.
The characters finally disclose Important Information to each other at 40%, but to be honest, I couldn't make myself care. DNF.