Romance Schmomance
To me, Brooke was more realistic about everything. At times I didn't quite understand her hang-ups about being with someone since Finn showed her many times how much he ultimately cared for her. Despite his insta-love madness, his genuine character is what I liked the most about him.
The military veteran project; I was dying to know more about that and was hoping for a more emotional connection with it. I did like that Melody shared Brooke and Finn's story about their military life.
I really wanted to love this one, but it didn't quite work for me. However, Melody sets up the story for the next book, which I definitely looking forward to reading.