chymerra
Written on Nov 17, 2016
What aggravated me was that it had such a good storyline to it. Woman comes home to care for ailing father figure and gets embroiled with her ex fiance, his twin sister, his wife and his daughter. It should have been good…..but it wasn’t. It was very painful to read and I almost DNF’d the book.
The plot line was crazy good and so much potential. It really did take me back to when I went through my Gothic romance phase. If the author had just stuck to that, the book could have been good. But she started adding that Mallory could read auras, see and hear ghosts and can receive messages from ghosts through dreams and I kinda went “eh”.
The relationship between Blaine and Mallory didn’t feel real to me and actually felt kinda forced. She didn’t like him in the beginning of the book….was jealous of him and went out of her way to be rude to him. It wasn’t an instant dislike. She didn’t like him for years and years because her Uncle Robert looked at him like a son. Actually, she was jealous of Blaine. So I, as a reader, am supposed to believe that she did a turnaround in the 2 weeks that she was staying with her uncle?
Even the secondary characters were awful. Kathy, Jason, Jessica, Ivy….no personality or they were over the top. And the mystery of what happened to Kathy, what was happening to Ivy and the relationship between Jessica and Jason was pretty cut and dry and I figured out each of them in turn. Plus, I was getting sick of Mallory psychoanalyzing everyone.
The sex scenes, I will say, were pretty tastefully done and were no frills. Actually, I couldn’t tell if I was actually reading sex scene or not.
The ending was pretty typical and there was a HEA.