Leah
It’s Up To You New York opens with a conversation between Holly and an unhappy VitaSlim (like Ryvita for those wondering) customer, who is desperate to lose weight so she can look good in her bikini and can’t believe that putting a KFC chicken wing on top of her VitaSlim isn’t making her slim. I was hooked from that. I liked the plot, of how Holly goes on a show called Street Scout, a show looking for new models, and how she meets the enigmatic Max Moore and finds herself becoming closer to him. I was a bit peeved at how long it took to get to New York – like half the book – especially as the title and the synopsis hints that it’s a mega factor in the book, and it was, it just took ages to get there. If I have any criticism of the plot it’s that I’d have liked to have seen Holly’s career progression. It sort of stagnates after Street Scout and the novels ends without that being resolved, and I’d have liked to have seen Holly in the future. Did she make it as a model? Did she go back to VitaSlim? What the heck happened?
I really enjoyed It’s Up To You New York, I think Tess Daly is a talented writer, and she hasn’t just jumped on the book writing bandwagon for the sake of it, it’s actually a viable career option and I forsee her going on to write many brilliant novels. This is one celeb who very much gets the thumbs up from me, and I am looking forward to going back and reading her debut novel. Her characters were people you cared about, and though Holly was a bit naive (and had numerous tug-of-wars with her inner feelings, particularly concerning a hot famous man) I liked her. I felt she was a worthy lead character, someone to root for, and it again goes back to how I’d have liked to have seen her career progress. Perhaps there’ll be a sequel? I don’t know. I certainly hope so. If one thing was lacking it was the romance side of things. I was rooting for Joe Taylor, the underdog, who I felt deserved a bit more air time, as I wasn’t a fan at all of Holly’s on/off boyfriend James. He was a bit too uppity for my liking. So, yes, all in all a worthy second novel, bravo Tess!