Danielle Ackley-McPhail
Written on Dec 17, 2015
Too many points of the story were run into the ground with constant repetition in the narrative, with the same details repeating over and over again, as if we might have forgotten along the way...again.
That having been said, I really enjoyed the magic system and the descriptions of the world, though way too many times Aurora was sharing details about her surroundings she really should not have known.
This author has some serious potential, but she also needs a serious developmental editor to help her achieve it.