Demonic Persuasion

by Mahalia Levey

[Romance Schmomance]

As I was going through my paperbacks, I randomly picked this one up and started to read. I thought this had a lot of potential because I was pretty fascinated with the world that the author was creating for us.

Now, I'm all for a strong heroine, but I had to shake my head a lot at Fatal because of certain decisions she'd make. She knew that she shouldn't have done it and was told by numerous people to not do it, but her arrogance got in the way every single time. But she does have a little bit of a development throughout the story.

I actually really like Orobus, gritty, sexy and quite dominant. But he sure does know how to charm your pants off, kind of crazy for a demon, right?

Normally, I don't read erotica, but this author did fantastic on that part. Everything was HOT.

Overall, the storyline was intriguing, but just needed a bit more fine tuning.