The Sun Down Motel

by Simone St. James

[kentholloway]

What a few of the more negative reviewers, I believe, have failed to grasp is that this book is neither 'horror' nor 'true crime' (it's fiction, after all). It is, however, a great example of paranormal mystery. Was it scary? No, but it wasn't intended to be. Was it creepy in places? I'd say yes. But we also need to remember the 'real' monster in this story is living and breathing, not necessarily the ethereal occupants of the motel.

I've read some complaints about the shifting of points of view, from Viv in the past to Carly in the present. Okay, so you don't like that approach. That's fine. But I see no reason to discount the story entirely based on your personal preference and give it a negative review. Honestly, the shifts in points of view quite simply worked. And they worked very well to weave the over-arcing story together in a fun and dynamic way.

If I had any complaints (as a few have mentioned already) is that it seems Ms. St. James spends a little too much time describing the clothing and hairstyles of every character every single time they appear in a scene. I get the need to the supply descriptions of hairstyles and clothing when establishing the differences in fashion between 1982 and 2017, but once or twice is really all you need. I got to where I'd skip the descriptions of people entirely (which in a mystery novel could potentially be an issue if something they're wearing is a clue). This foible, however, is personal preference on my part and doesn't take away from the story.

In truth, this is my first St. James novel and I was thoroughly impressed. It was a great mystery with great atmosphere and with great paranormal presence. It did what a book of this kind is intended to do: let me veg out for a while and escape from day to day life while entertaining me thoroughly. Absolutely enjoyed this book!