Her Kiss: A Lesbian Romance (Lesbian Sex Stories, #1)

by Willow Hawke

[Jane]

1. I'd like to start off by saying I, oblivious Jane, was unaware of what I was getting myself into when reading this. HOWEVER, I chose to stick through it because I am a mature adult am a mature adult am an adult and wanted to prove to myself I can be mature. Sometimes.

2. This was...interesting. There was little development, though. The story exists for the sole purpose of sex between two long lost lovers.

3. Conversation feels Hallmark-y's brand of fake.

4. At the end, the writing felt weak. I had to reread some pages to get them to make sense, but some others didn't make sense. Like, there were no transitions between different positions -- it just jumped like a movie montage, like the reader was supposed to catch up.