A Duke in Disguise (Regency Impostors, #2)

by Cat Sebastian

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I’m torn. Parts of this were great. The characters. The scenario that set the plot in motion. The first third of the story.

But it needed more… something. More showing, not telling. More focus. More heat. Less withholding information. (GRRR. Talk it out, people.)

And honestly, it needed less plot. Or, it needed a higher page count to flesh out that plot. But even fleshed out, I just didn’t need the duke thing. It’s been done to death. I don’t care. Put those characters in the print shop, set a few plates spinning, stick to that smaller scope. I would have been one happy girl.