Ash & Bramble by Sarah Prineas

Ash & Bramble

by Sarah Prineas

After Pin and Shoe escape from servitude in the Godmother's fortress, they learn that she has taken control of Story, which can warp the world around it, forcing people into its shape, and they decide to try to break out and create their own destinies in this tale that features many familiar characters.

Reviewed by shannonmiz on

2 of 5 stars

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I don't really know what to say about Ash & Bramble, which is a big part of why it is getting the mini-review treatment. I had heard that the first half of the book was rather slow, so I went in knowing and expecting it (and it turned out to hold true for me), but I had powered through in the hopes that the book would become more exciting in the second half. And it did, just not enough to make up for the first half.

I liked Shoe and his storyline more than Pin's. I didn't dislike Pin, I just have as much of a connection or reaction to her. Shoe was more likable for me, and he exuded more emotionally. There were a few minor characters that I enjoyed, but the other key characters were a little underdeveloped for my taste.

The story itself was a bit confusing. The beginning, while slow, at least made sense to me. As the plot got more intricate, I started having a lot more questions. Some were answered, but definitely not all. There was a lot of just accepting things at face value, which I am not very good at doing. Had the world building been stronger, I think I'd have taken to the story more.

But, I was definitely invested in Shoe and Pin enough to see how their story would end, so I did keep reading. The last 20% of the book was definitely paced better, and the characters' personalities became more apparent. I still didn't have all my questions answered, but I read that there'll be a companion novel so that might be interesting.

Bottom Line: The characters, especially Shoe, made me want to keep reading. The story was slow at times, confusing at times, but definitely ended strongly. I'd likely give the companion a try when it comes out, so I think that's probably a plus too.

*Copy provided by publisher for review

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