The Rose & the Dagger (Wrath and the Dawn, #2)

by Renée Ahdieh

[Jo]

2.5 Stars.

Originally posted on Once Upon a Bookcase.

After absolutely loving The Wrath & the Dawn by Renée Ahdieh, I was so excited to read the sequel, The Rose & the Dagger - so much so that I bought it as soon as I was able. And although I really enjoyed the story, I'm left with mixed feelings.

After being whisked away from the crumbling city of Rey by Tariq, Shahrzad has now been reunited with her sister and father in the Badawi camp in the desert. But here it feels like a prison, with everyone watching her, trying to see where her loyalties really lie - with her first love, Tariq, or with the murdering boy-king. Forces are gathering to march against Khalid, and Shazi knows she needs to make a plan. Shazi must prevent the impending war and find a way to break the curse that threatens the kingdom of Khorasan if Khalid doesn't kill a young woman each dawn. She needs to get to the Fire Temple and seek the help of the magus Musa Zaragoza, but to get there she must search deep within herself and connect with the magic in her blood.

When I first finished this book yesterday, I thought it was amazing! I had a few little niggles, but I really enjoyed the story on the whole. But as I continued thinking about it, the more those niggles became problems. I was left with so many questions, there were things that felt a little too convenient, and characters who felt like the sole purpose for their existence was to be the solution to a problem.

The Wrath & the Dawn ended on such a cliffhanger, I expected The Rose & the Dagger to get things moving pretty quickly. I was expecting a lot of action right from the offset, but in actual fact, it took quite a while for anything to really start happening. There were reasons for this that I was able to accept, and so continued to enjoy the story, though it felt quite at odds with how the last book ended. However, there was very little to come that reached anywhere near epic.

When Shazi finally manages to get to the Fire Temple, Musa introduces her to a young magus, Artan, who he believes will be able to help Shazi break Khalid's curse. Artan was a really great character; he gives as good as he gets when it comes to Shazi, and is really quite amusing. But really, the whole purpose of Artan is to introduce Shazi to someone else. He is such an interesting character and he had so much potential for having a bigger role and being a better potential ally to Shazi, but his part ends up being quite small, and it just felt he was there to solve a problem. I had so many questions surrounding him and his family, and just felt his character wasn't developed enough.

Then we get to the whole issue of the curse and how to break, and this is where my niggles kept on niggling until I couldn't ignore them. I have some big questions surrounding it all, and I can't talk about it without spoiling the story, so if you haven't yet read this book, don't click the button below.


So why does Artan's aunt, Isuke get to decide how the curse should be broken? First she says it took a life to create the curse, so it will take a life to break it. If that's the case, why, when she hears about the magical book Jahandar has, does she change her mind and say destroying the book will break the curse? She wants the book destroyed because it causes such destruction, fine, but why does she get to decide that if Khalid does that, the curse will be broken? She says the curse was paid for in blood, thus time, and so blood must be paid to break the curse. And as destroying the book will also require blood payment, the curse will be broken when Khalid destroys the book. Why?! Why do things suddenly change so drastically? From death to some blood and the destroying of a book? Again, it just felt like a solution to a problem: get the book away from Jahandar so he doesn't cause any more magical disasters. What is this book? How did Artan's parents create it? Why did they? What has it done in the past? And why does Isuke care so much, when she's hardly the most honourable person going? I don't understand.

And the actual destroying of the book and breaking the curse? Too easy. Ok, Khalid struggles a bit, but not a huge deal. It's hardly the most massive or epic of scenes in this book. This curse has cost the lives of so many young women, has given Khalid such a terrible reputation, and has led to forces gathering to take him down... and breaking the curse took five pages. And most of that with Khalid internalising a lot of thoughts rather than actual action (It felt a whole lot like when Ron tried to destroy the locket Horcrux in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, but not any where near as exciting.). Five pages to break a curse that had caused so much chaos. It just felt far too easy! Considering all this curse has caused, it should have been much harder to break it, and was such an anti-climax.

Things did get pretty exciting towards the end; I was really anticipating all the danger and action that would surely be coming any second now. But even that felt resolved all too easily for me. And the ending? Such a cop out. There was nothing epic about this book. I'm so disappointed by how easy everything seemed, how convenient, and The Rose & the Dagger just didn't deliver the fast-paced action I felt the end of The Wrath & the Dawn hinted at.

And yet I love these characters. I enjoyed being with them again, seeing Shazi being spunky and brave, and Khalid being such a lovely guy. I loved seeing the development of other relationships, and I enjoyed how some things turned out. So I did enjoy the story for the characters, but there were too many issues for me, too.

I will give Ahdieh another go and read her next book, The Flame in the Mist, the first in another duology, this time a retelling of Mulan. I really hope this duology doesn't have too many issues, or I might just have to give up reading Ahdieh's novels.