The Big D

by Brittany Crowley

[Jack]

About 3 stars. This turned out to be a really average book. The premise sounded amazing, the first couple chapters were amazing. The characters were initially really likeable. But then everything fell apart for me once you found out the big D wasn't a simple delivery driver. There's some superficial drama thrown in there, that felt really skimmed over. Nothing was ever very developed. Time skipped around without any clear indication. Characters never really grew on me, or grew as people.

And the insta love! Waaay to much insta love! I would have loved to be shown how their relationship developed and progressed. Instead we get that they're in love and wanna get married in like a six months.

I was wishing the delivery boy could have stayed a delivery boy. Although it was nice to see that he wasn't a complete control freak like so many males in New Adult are now a days.

Tragedy struck of course, for more drama maybe? But I didn't really care about any of the characters enough to get too upset. Everything is way too simple in this book, not much is fleshed out.

And the grammar errors!! That pulled me out of the story so many times! Actually I'm put it at 2.5 stars for that! I feel like the author either didn't have an editor or had a really incompetent one to let some really simple things slip by.

Overall a mediocre book, with some decent humor. Although I had my eyes rolling at the insta love. Characters were refreshing though.